I am writing a song about a lonely sheep herder titled, " There will never be another ewe." Will it be a hit?

My husband sayd "It sounds BAA-AA-AAD. You should quit KIDDING around." But he said it in kind of a SHEEPISH tone. But I think you should RAM it through. And HAY if it doesn't work, you'll know...someone will say it was a WOOLY-brained idea.